My grandparents are nice! Everytime they come to visit our family, they play the games that I want. These games include: Connect 4, Headbandz, and sometimes even the jumbo lego blocks. They also tell me and my sister stories. They bring us our presents, and we open them. Once I found a toy penguin in my box with a giant pen. After I finish unwrapping my present, my sister opens her box. One time, she found a toy penguin and 3 novels.
By the time we finish playing with our presents, it's time for dinner. Everytime my grandparents come, Mom has made a very yummy meal. I am the first one to finish my meal. While I wait for all of the others to finish, I plan the next games. "Saanvi? What games do you want to play? Come back, everyone!" Everyone comes back after a couple of minutes, rinses their plates and spoons, and goes upstairs. Now, everyone says that we can't play more games. But this is just the beginning of their visit. There is more to come. By: Arhan
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I am so happy that you've written a post like this! Although there are things that you could do to make this post even better, it was a good attempt. I sure hope you continue writing on your blog and enjoy it. There are things that you can also do to improve your grammar and language, but good post. You may need to fix a few things too, but I hope my comments don't make you feel like you can't write anymore on your blog. I do hope you don't feel like this. Hey, it IS a good attempt!
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Mahima
11/9/2015 01:21:29 pm
Yes. There are things that you COULD do to make your post better. But remember, it was a good attempt and you are still young, so all's good.
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